Sunday, May 17, 2015

100 Word Challenge Week 33


“I’--- WHOA!” Christopher screamed as he got a face full of flames. He quickly dodged the attack before raising his sword and realizing he woke up the dragon. “Shoot! Now how am I going to get the apple?!” Christopher stood up and tried to adjust his hat but the ferocious wind blew it away. The dragon started charging at him while snarling loudly. As Christopher got ready to attack, the dragon ran past him and started tearing up his hat. He realized that it only wanted to play. “Sit?” the dragon obeyed him. “Well, I’ll call you Festus” he laughed as he took an apple.
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  1. Mrs Fairburn (Team 100 WC - England)May 26, 2015 at 8:23 PM

    Hello Grace. Your first sentence grabs the reader's attention. The plot is well developed and I like the twist at the end. I wonder if Christopher and the dragon will have other adventures? You shouldn't use an exclamation mark with a question mark. Also check that all sentences begin with a capital letter.
    Mrs Fairburn (Team 100WC -England)

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